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Devin Hanson's avatar

Love this. “Flickering over floorboards” caught me, both the rhythm and the feeling! ✨

Saira Anwar's avatar

Kassi,"bobbing feral in the breeze" stopped me completely, one wild word in the middle of all that tenderness and it opens the whole poem up. And then the turn to manna, breaking bread, dipping in oil, you've made the act of noticing beauty into something sacred and sustaining. This is communion in the truest sense, what a gift this is. Amazing 🕊️❤️✨️

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