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Devin Hanson's avatar

Love this. “Flickering over floorboards” caught me, both the rhythm and the feeling! ✨

Kassi Wilson's avatar

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Saira Anwar's avatar

Kassi,"bobbing feral in the breeze" stopped me completely, one wild word in the middle of all that tenderness and it opens the whole poem up. And then the turn to manna, breaking bread, dipping in oil, you've made the act of noticing beauty into something sacred and sustaining. This is communion in the truest sense, what a gift this is. Amazing 🕊️❤️✨️

Kassi Wilson's avatar

Thank you Saira for reading and reflecting with me! 🙏🏻☀️

Saira Anwar's avatar

My pleasure! Always. Your words are worth sitting with. ☀️🕊️

Kristi Joy Rimbach's avatar

Beautiful uplifting poem, Kassi💕

Kassi Wilson's avatar

Thank you 🙏🏻

Maya Sarin's avatar

Beautiful poem, Kassi! I think this is one of my favorites by you ✨

Kassi Wilson's avatar

Thank you Maya! 🙏🏻

Poetry Tracks In the Snow's avatar

Gorgeous Kassi 💛

Kassi Wilson's avatar

Thank you Holly

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3dEdited

I can feel the sacred beauty and reverence for the golden hour of the morning and the softness of living in the beauty of nature. 💚