Kassi, this is stunning. The rhythm, the gentle “yes” that threads each stanza, it all builds toward such a hopeful and grounding message. I felt held by this piece. The repetition of “Yes” gives it a steady rhythm that mirrors resilience, and the contrast between chaos and radiant light is beautifully done. It acknowledges the storm while offering hope, a reminder that even in darkness, light still permeates. That last line, “I imagine a really good ending,” gave me chills. Thank you for always reminding us that even in chaos, stillness and light remain. ❤️🔥🫶🏻
"I imagine a really good ending." love this line so much
Thank for sharing, I like it!
Nice writing, sentences with natural symbols, very natural. I like this writing.
Thank you! 🤍🤍🤍
I hope so, Kassi!
I mean.... life itself is hope...
So is poetry.
Best Wishes - Dave :)
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I do too 🙏❤️✨🌎💫 Happy Mother’s Day 🌸 Beautiful KASSI ☀️ SO MUCH LOVE ❤️😘✨🙏☀️🌸🌟🌎💫
Thank you Annie 🙏🏻💯🤍
Kassi, this is lovely!
💗💯☀️thank you!
Kassi, this was my favourite from your chapbook. So lovely to read it again.
🤍🤍🤍thank you! So glad you like it!
Kassi, this is stunning. The rhythm, the gentle “yes” that threads each stanza, it all builds toward such a hopeful and grounding message. I felt held by this piece. The repetition of “Yes” gives it a steady rhythm that mirrors resilience, and the contrast between chaos and radiant light is beautifully done. It acknowledges the storm while offering hope, a reminder that even in darkness, light still permeates. That last line, “I imagine a really good ending,” gave me chills. Thank you for always reminding us that even in chaos, stillness and light remain. ❤️🔥🫶🏻
Thank you Saira for your kind thoughts and encouragement. Blessings to you today! ☀️
My pleasure, Kassi. Wishing you a wonderful Mother’s Day filled with peace, and love! Blessings to you too! ❤️🥰👩🏻🍼
Beautiful.